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По умолчанию please, help me with english composition

i have english resume and letter to employer for english exam.
please, find syntax errors in the text:


CURRICULUM VITAE
Eugeniy Tomov

Personal details
Date of birth 28/7/87
Address Russian Federation, Novosibirsk city
Email _dex@rambler.ru
Education
1993 – 2001 Standard grades in Maths, English, Computer Studies, Geography, Science, secondary school #165
2001– 2005 novosibirsk aircraft technical college
2006 – present ACM faculty in NSTU

Work experience
2005 – present Senior engineer on aircraft enterprise NAPO im. V.P. Chkalova.
My experience includes:
• adjustment of technological processes for fuel system of Su-34 plane.
• Requests formation for logging constructive changes of fuel system.
• Introduction of constructive changes to the building planes.

I have knowledge of these areas:
• Windows 95,98,Me,XP
• Office XP
• Mandrake Linux 10.0
• Web-programming with using php, apache, mysql, css, html
• Web-design base knowledge
• Batch-file programming
• LAN mounting
Hobbies and interests
cats
Referees
1 chief Vtorushin V.S. – chief of shop №9, NAPO im. V.P. Chkalova.
2 Professor Ivanov N.V. – professor, NSTU.
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Kr. Prospect street
Novosibirsk

26 Juny 2007

Fedor Peskunov
Personnel Manager Digitum
K.Marksa 24
Novosibirsk

Dear Fedor,
I am writing to apply for the position of Senior Programmer which was advertised on 12 Juny in “Rabota segodnja”. To my the most great regret, I am don`t have experience of the work in IT.
But I have many practical experience in C# development, also I have diploma of NSTU.
After two years hard works on aircraft enterprise, I am has understood: my future lies on the programmer way.
I hope, you give me work in you company.

Yours sincerely,
Eugeniy Tomov